"Madison walks in, to Nick who is fixing his bike.
Madison: (Dissapointed and resigned tone) You’re leaving.(sad face)
Nick: uh yeah. I’m gonna see my adoptive parents,there a lot to tell them (awkward laugh)
Madison: So… you’re not coming back…?(sad tone heard at the end)(noted:disappointed face)
Nick:I didn’t say that.
Madison: (hopeful look and slight smile) You are coming back (suppressed smile)
Nick: uhhh.,,What I’m saying is that I’d like to come back.If there was something(looks away)…OR (looks at Madison pointedly) someone to come back to.
Madison: (struggle to speak,then outburst smile)Well there is; There’s Xander, Vida, Chip.(nick looks up at her as he crouches to get something from his bike) uhmmm (note: Madison is looking uncomfortable) Toby,(nick looks a bit disappointed) (note:desperate tone In madisons voice is more pronounced),Phineas,Leelee (looks away).and uhh…and…(nick looks at her hope seen within his chocolate eyes)uhmm and..(scared look in HER coffee eyes)…me(nick: shocked yet soft look in his eyes)…Uhh I(Madison reluctant and unsure to say)… I want you to come back for me
Nick can be seen happy (in a suppressed way) and shows a small smile. He takes out his most treasured possession,his old red baby blanket.
Nick: (while offering he blanket to Madison who looks shocked)will you hold on to this?
Nick gives a slight nod of reassurance and looks hopeful that she would.
Madison smiles a small smile.
Madison : (small nod) sure.( gives full blown appreciative smile at nick)
Nick smiles a 100 watt smile at Madison while getting on his bike.The motorbike starts with a slight whine and then goes off but not before nick looks back at maddison.
Madison: (background;fading motorcycle) (Slight grin) He’ll come back.(in a reassuring tone)
Madison walks away with a smile etched on her face"
Wow.that blows me away EVERYTIME.
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